Comments on: The BlogAdda Weekly: A lot can happen over…

By: Narayan Yaduvanshi

Narayan Yaduvanshi — Wed, 24 Aug 2016 17:46:05 +0000

A lot is happening on this adda…

By: ILA VARMA

ILA VARMA — Wed, 24 Aug 2016 14:37:06 +0000

EDITED:
Just remember at times parents or kids are not appreciable, still we stay in the relationship then why walk out from marriage.
Give it a thought.

By: ILA VARMA

ILA VARMA — Wed, 24 Aug 2016 14:11:22 +0000

After reading the concluding part, I came to conclusion was that Ameeta was fickle minded sailing in two boats n the indecisive people are bound to get into trouble. It was bad on part of Saurav to disappear without information but life is another name of adjustments and the people who know to adjust can ferry well in life. When she was with Saurav for five years then instead of walking out, she should have tried to mend the ways. Human err and if we start falling out on each other folly then no relationship will go beyond. Further, if you are committed one need to focus on the relationship instead of weighing the relation with someone else. No one is perfect in this world except the Supreme power, that too just sits above and enjoy watching his creation going helpless at times.

The story was well scripted but I pray that such circumstances don’t chase people in real life and even if it does, people should think twice before breaking off. Walking out is not the solution nor appreciable rather stay in n help to improve and if still persists then one can think of walking out.

Just remember at times parents or kids are not appreciable, still we stay in the relationship then walk out from marriage.

Give it a thought.

By: EF

EF — Wed, 24 Aug 2016 14:09:44 +0000

OK so Saurabh just wanted a break from Ameeta’s nagging and let her search for him and become restless. What an insensitive person he could be and he’s totally not deserving of anyone’s feelings, neither of Ameeta nor Karan. Karan shouldn’t have hid this truth from Ameeta after watching her in pain all these days and seeing her in distress. He must have promised Saurabh but since he claims to love her, it’s not good of him to watch her misery all these days. He should have simply avoided talking to her the week instead of being with her and making her feel that he was a true friend to her. He was so wrong as a friend to Ameeta. I’m glad Ameeta took the right step and broke off her relationship with Saurabh and also did not accept Karan’s proposal as she needs time to get herself soughted. It’s not easy for anyone to break a 5-year-old relationship and then go in for another immediately. She needs to think that why did she choose a wrong person like Saurabh and what she needs to do now for herself. She took the right decision finally and I’m happy with the end.

By: Paresh Godhwani

Paresh Godhwani — Wed, 24 Aug 2016 13:57:47 +0000

I meant stories not parts.

By: Paresh Godhwani

Paresh Godhwani — Wed, 24 Aug 2016 13:57:06 +0000

I knew Karan will make a way in her life. I commented that in third part. I think Ameeta took a right decision rather than puking her emotions on Karan and Karan taking advantage of that like he did when Saurabh was not there. It is good to spend some time with oneself. It makes you strong. I congratulated you in last part only. Waiting for more parts like these.

By: Radhika Mundra

Radhika Mundra — Wed, 24 Aug 2016 13:50:46 +0000

Okay, I just read the whole story, all the parts. I was expecting a cliched love story, that it somewhat was but the one thing that I’m thankful for is that Ameeta didn’t say yes to Karan immediately. That would have just been disappointing. Another thing, the character development of Saurabh is quite weak. He had been with Ameeta for 5 years but he took the breakup all too well. There should have been a little remorse if he loved her at all but maybe that’s the story, he had stopped loving her long back. Well, a good read nonetheless.

Keep this on! Would love to read more stories and not just love stories, maybe a thriller, this time around?
Also, I wrote this story that, maybe, if you guys can spare the time, should check it out: http://www.expressinglife.in/2016/05/short-story-ancient-song-part-i.html

Thanks, had fun reading it! 🙂